Aubrey and me are mailing through the federal department of corrections email system corrlinks. We also discuss upcoming posts, as we did about Schizophrenia:
Some editing suggestions. You should remove the final words ‘in this fucking insanity.’ Ending after either ‘apprehensive,’ or ‘afraid’ is stronger.
Then end it with ‘afraid.‘ In here I even had to end it different lest someone think I was Afraid 🙂 When I first wrote it, I sent it to psychology thinking it brilliant. They in turn had me locked in SHU for evaluation for three weeks.